Wednesday, March 20, 2019

Sr. Speaker Materials

Guidelines for Writing a Commencement Address



The draft you write for consideration does not need to be a final version, but should give the panelists a clear idea of what you plan to say in your speech.  The traditional commencement address has had content which reflects back on the class's experiences and also gives advice or guidance for the future.  The tone should be one which inspires and motivates the listeners.



Although the Commencement Address is directed at the graduating class, the message needs to be meaningful and appropriate for the adult audience present as well.  Content, language, or style which parents or grandparents might find offensive is not suitable for a Commencement Address.



Humor can be an effective minor element of a Commencement Address.  The predominant message, and consequently the predominant writing style, should be serious, thoughtful and inspirational. 



Format:  This might be helpful.  It is an all purpose formula.  It is not required.  Feel free to be creative.  But as a starting point, you might want to observe the following steps.







Introduction--

* Attention getting anecdote

* Establish a theme -- Past speakers have used themes likethe qualities of Eagles or the symbolic importance of bridges

* Set purpose or message



Body--

* Reflect on events of past 4 years

* Reflect on present status

* Reflect on  where things are headed



Conclusion--

* Re-emphasize message

* Closing thoughts and anecdotes



A few helpful suggestions:

Though you may want to fill your speech with inspirational quotations, and heartfelt thoughts of hope, be careful of overusing clichés.  Because they have been used so often, clichés do not always hold much power within a text and tend to be easily forgotten by an audience.


On the other hand, the most memorable speeches are those that tell some type of story.  Typically, speakers will use either brief anecdotes or longer narratives to convey their message.  As opposed to citing bland clichés that are easy to forget, stories tend to stay with people and carry a stronger emotional and intellectual impact. 
Here are some samples of past commencement addresses. 
2018
2017
2013
2012 

Friday, March 01, 2019

March AVReading Newsletter


In our yearlong examination of current educational research, I found a very interesting study published in this month’s issue of American Educational Research Journal published by AERA.  The study was entitled “‘Despite the Odds’: Unpacking the Politics of Black Resilience Neoliberalism” completed by Kevin L. Clay of Rutgers University.  There were two things that initially caught my eye about the study.  First, the title seemed to question that idea of resilience, similar to the study that Jae Cody wrote about in last month’s newsletter, and secondly, it was action research-- a type of research that positions the researcher not only as a scientific observer but as an advocate, implementing an action step of some sort.  Action research is not a new methodology, but it hasn’t always gotten the same attention as the other forms of educational research.
            In this case, the researcher, working with eight high school students in an Upward Bound program, set out to help them “destabilize” the idea of Black Resilience Neoliberalism in order to “reconstitute empowerment”.  Ok, that sounds really academic and heady.  However, the argument of the study is much more accessible.  The gist of the study is that students have internalized a narrative about Black resilience. The narrative tells them “despite the odds,” they can succeed.  On the face of it, that might seem like a good thing, right?  We want our students to believe that no matter their circumstances, hard work will pay off.  And the author certainly states that he doesn’t want anyone to be discouraged from working hard and doing their best in the face of adversity and White supremacy.  However, the Black resilience narrative has consistently been used throughout the educational community as well as throughout political dialogue on race, as a means of decentralizing the larger story of structural racism that has created the need to overcome adversity in the first place. 
            As an example, Clay uses the rhetoric of former Presidential candidate Ben Carson, who is African American and who often talks about how “exceptional” people-- and specifically exceptional Black people-- will be successful no matter their circumstances, so everyone should be exceptional and overcome their obstacles.  Clay argues that this type of rhetoric has a number of extremely negative effects.  First, it normalizes structural racism.  It essentially argues that the system can’t be changed to become more equitable, so instead individuals simply have to rise to the occasion and overcome racism.  Second, it leaves those who are struggling to overcome those obstacles feeling inherently broken.  Stories of Black exceptionalism-- people who have succeeded under extraordinary conditions-- when overused are “leveraged as a critique of Black folks who, for whatever reason, cannot summon the will and long-suffering demonstrated by their enslaved, maimed, and generally despised ancestors to mettle their way through all manner of state-sponsored obstacles, dehumanization or terror.”  
            What is at stake, Clay furthers, is “a desire to centralize ingenuity and triumphalism in a story that is at its core a testament of the state’s perpetual violence against Black people.”  In working with his action research, he found that this group of students-- all of whom were students of color-- had embraced many of the aspects of this Black resilience narrative, and as a result had internalized beliefs that if someone didn’t succeed, it was simply because of their own shortcomings.  Furthermore, they come to think of these oppressive obstacles as character building.  As one of his students wrote in a journal, “I believe everyone has the chance to reach their riches in life.  If anything, where I live [a segregated community] pushes me to fulfill my every dream.”  In other words, she believes that her experiences in segregated spaces actually toughens her for the fight ahead.  Within her world view, the inequality has become normalized and unchangeable.  It is no longer the problem.  Not having enough resilience and toughness is. 
            Clay concludes that the shift should be to exploring more narratives of “collective transgression” on the part of the Black community.  Instead of focusing on stories of individuals who have overcome the system of White supremacy, stories and narratives should highlight the success of “organized deviance” undermining structural racism.
As mentioned in earlier letters, educational research has the capacity to challenge and encourage schools and educators beyond their current understandings.  In a state which still has the largest racial gap in student performance, we need to continue to critique and question our choices and to work more diligently to address the way we have institutionalized narratives that perpetuate the problem.

Full newsletter here.  

February AVReading Newsletter


For this month’s newsletter, I have invited Jae Cody (AVHS World Language Teacher and STEM Advisor) to write a reflection on a fascinating  study she had read as part of our Data Blitz Team which meets the first Thursday of every month..  The study was Christopher Kirchgasler’s “True Grit: Making a Scientific Object and Pedagogical Tool” published in AERA in August of 2018.  Here is her description of the study along with some reflections on the idea of grit.
In an effort to understand the role that “grit” has come to play in educational discussions, Kirchgasler traces the idea of grit back to American pioneers. Grit was considered a key reason that white settlers were successful in settling the frontier. Their success was contrasted with the natives living on the land, and the idea of American “rugged individualism” was closely associated with the idea of grit and perseverance in “civilizing” the land.
The thread of grit being associated with progress and civilization extends to the early 20th century and the idea of scientifically studying behavior in psychology. As Dewey and others tried to study child development and find ways to optimize growth and learning, grit became a way to differentiate between rational scientific principles and superstition and tradition in child-rearing.
While earlier thinkers considered grit to be something found in only some individuals, today’s educational thinking pursues grit more as a trait that can be developed and refined. It is being used in KIPP schools as well as in the PISA study and in learning outcomes for school reforms in Sub-Saharan Africa. Kirchgasler identifies several problems with the modern use of “grit” as a school outcome.
- Grit has become a scientific truth. In these programs, success and failure are attributed at least in part to students’ perceived level of grit. This establishes a “right” kind of child and make it easier to blame students  (and their lack of grit) for failures.
- It gives grit preference over other positive attributes (creativity, social awareness) held by many students.
- It directly links grit to performance and economic progress.
As I was reading, I was reminded of a story from NPR that I used to play for my AVID students (“Struggle for Smarts: How Eastern and Western Cultures Tackle Learning”). It is on how “struggling” is perceived in Asian and American schools. The author observed classrooms in both countries and found that struggling in American schools was generally considered a sign of weakness or low intelligence, whereas students in Asian schools were expected to struggle, and their families and teachers used language that demonstrated that struggling was a sign of strength.
Much of the article was influenced by the ideas around fixed and growth mindsets. However, at the end, the reporter describes a study done by an educational researcher. First graders at schools in the US and in Japan were given an impossible math problem to solve. In the US, students took an average of 30 seconds to stop working on the problem. In the Japanese school, the researcher stopped the study after an hour because every student was still working.
As a teacher, I often find myself wishing that my students were more persistent, that they would push themselves beyond the first unknown word in a text and try to get the big picture even when it is not 100% clear. That said, it is important to acknowledge that persisting or being “gritty” for the sake of being gritty is not always good. At some point, there is value in realizing that a problem is impossible, that the effort being put forth in one activity is taking away from time in something else, and that a goal is no longer as useful or as meaningful as it once was and should be changed. Grit is important, but not more important than self-awareness, creativity, and all of the other attributes students bring to our classrooms.
 Full newsletter here